Narrative Writing
WALT add details and interesting vocabulary to support our ideas.
WALT write a narrative.
WALT use directional language in our writing.
Task 1: Watch the click here video to help set the scene and to meet the characters.
What can be seen?
Tropical palm tree,sandy beach,clear water.
What can be heard?
Waves crashing,pig noisy’s,a song.
What can be smelt?
sand,trees,rocks.
What can be felt?
He can swim at the beach.
Who are the characters in your story?
Kama,kai
Where is your story set?
Sandy beach.
What problem is going to happen in your story?
It is about a pig that is swimming at Hawaii.
How are you going to solve the problem?
I don’t know how i’m going to solve the problem.
You are going to write below.
was kai and the pig’s name was Kama They had beautiful tropical palm trees
Think about how you can:
Add detail to your ideas using interesting vocabulary.
Use directional language (in front of, behind, to the left of…) to make connections between your ideas.
Write here:
One day there was a man and a pig they lived in Hawaii. and the man's name kai he looks like is he is wearing Rainbow short’s and wearing glasses and the pig he's a dark color on his body. They had beautiful tropical palm trees .i saw waves crashing and trees and rocks also I saw was pig Noises and saw sand they swam in clear water.they are surfing in the sea they are recording themselves when they are in the water the the camera is on top of the pig’s head and the man is using something to Paddle the board.the next day i saw was the pig hand sand on his nose. They lived happily ever after.
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