The most dangerous writing challenge?

This was a most most dangerous writing  challenge and if you want he's the link  we had to do 5 minute's to do this?

Once a upon a time there was a man that woke up from sleep and he went for a bike ride.when he was riding his bike he was riding where he wanted to ride so when he rided he saw something that did not look very good for him to ride on.because he saw was a big hloe from the concrete and he looked down at it and it was so deep so he looked closer and saw that it was so deep he park his bike up and knee over and look inside of the path that he was going to ride on so he was just knee down and sand there and look inside of it the whole time when he out of his bike and he put his two hands on the concrete  and he was just looking at it the whole time the end of my story?

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This is my group's work and the bottom is a a diffident group?

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The most dangerous writing challenge?

This was a most most dangerous writing  challenge and if you want he's the link  we had to do 5 minute's to do this?


Once a upon a time there was a mouse that wanted to get a cheese from the mouse trap  that was holding the cheese down he was hinging from a rope an they put him down it get the cheese that was on the tried on of the mouse to get the cheese of the mouse trap so they the day that they did it was they did it at night time when they all went to sleep and the people that put the mouse trap there so the and curt the mouse so they were have no more mouse's in there house so the mouse treed to get the cheeses but it was suck if the mouse goes on it then is will get cut throw and it will be dead the end of the story? 

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